Category: Writers Block
Waltz of the Willow
10/24/07
Dance with me in the silver shower
A waltz of yesterday.
Offer your hand and a secret smile,
Your eyes alight with mischief.
Smooth and flowing our feet will glide
Like a feather upon the earth
Recall the play, the very scene
And sweep me away in the steady rhythm.
Alone we move, two ocean waves
Gentle and quiet, side by side.
And drift in whatever way we choose
To the cadence of the autumn drizzle.
"Secret sea foam eyes stare
Into the distance yonder there
And though you hide within your faith,
I'll always be there to find you again."
"Never will you know my face,
The image of another place.
For blinding horrors do await
The insolent fool who dares in haste."
Laughter lilting soft and low
fills my mind and then I know
I'm forever bound by the prospect of gold
Shining in your arms my love.
Turn me on the count of 1
And back on 4 the dance resumes
Endless, nameless the music flows
The rise and fall to match our stride.
HauntedReverie,
An absolutely stunning writing.
Your words they draw me into the watery scene ~
That is alive with the movements of dance..
Not once,
Rather again and again.
From the "silver shower" to
The being as "two ocean waves" to
The "drizzle of autumn" to the
"Secrete sea foam."
It's as if I can hear the music and feel it's rhythm
I want so much to be there
And it's as if I've been there in a distant past
What once was real
Is being made real again
As your words stir up memory of a past
{Kinda gives me to think upon
the ghost of Christmas past only
in this case, simple a ghost that lingers}
For the memory lives yet on.
Beautiful, really beautiful
May peacefulness be found ~
Within each your...
~*Thunderous MidNight*~
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